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Slit my skin
How could you do this to me?
On purpose?
"Sick"
Is that how you view me?
I know I will never love another
I can't help this horrible feeling I have
Or the tears you just made me cry
The silence was so abrupt
Have things changed so much
Or is this the pressure of life
Could you just not take me anymore?
Already I want to apologize
Because I know this is my fault
And I know
I can't use the same excuse on you
That I do on him
You're right
I am "sick"
Maybe with no cure
You deserve better
Though I fear that may never be me
There is only so much you can do
And you've done so much
I can't ask for more
Than one last chance
To prove I'm worthy of your love
©2004-2009 ~michelletenoh
:iconmichelletenoh:

Author's Comments

.. I didn't want to post this until I knew that everything was okay. And now I know. Everything is okay.

Written last night during an extremely emotional time as a diversion from cutting.

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:iconxvampyrex:
Yay... I love this poem so much. Im so glad you decided to post it. No piccie? makes me sad :(

--
Hugz & Stitches
:blackrose: Jess :blackrose:
:iconmichelletenoh:
No not yet. =( I'm working on making pics for all my poems but I have to think of them first. I didn't want to post it without knowing the outcome.

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:kitty:
.x. Kristin .x.
:pride:
~- The girl scout fell from grace -~
:spork:
:icongenesgirl:
Ah!

*piecing together what happened*

I feel that way about people to. Notice I said people. As in plural. Yeah, still plural.

--
x Rage More x
Dorenu-San

"Kill all the blacks
Kill all the reds
If there's war between the sexes
There'll be no people left
And so it goes
Around again
But now and then we wonder
Who the real men are"
:iconmichelletenoh:
Uh oh. I thought it was officially Sarah?

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:kitty:
.x. Kristin .x.
:pride:
~- The girl scout fell from grace -~
:spork:
:icongenesgirl:
It is officially Sarah. But that doesn't mean I don't have feelings for Nothing. I think I did the right thing, anyway.

--
x Rage More x
Dorenu-San

"Kill all the blacks
Kill all the reds
If there's war between the sexes
There'll be no people left
And so it goes
Around again
But now and then we wonder
Who the real men are"
:iconmichelletenoh:
Yeah... you couldn't lead them both on, atleast. And it's Sarah that you were thinking of a lot more recently.

--
:kitty:
.x. Kristin .x.
:pride:
~- The girl scout fell from grace -~
:spork:
:icongenesgirl:
This is true. I think I just need a risk. Nothing's too safe.

--
x Rage More x
Dorenu-San

"Kill all the blacks
Kill all the reds
If there's war between the sexes
There'll be no people left
And so it goes
Around again
But now and then we wonder
Who the real men are"
:iconmichelletenoh:
Everyone needs a risk.

--
:kitty:
.x. Kristin .x.
:pride:
~- The girl scout fell from grace -~
:spork:
:iconnightshaded:
I took your last line and ran far far away with it. Here it is:


Worth floats from birth like a boat in its berth,
Worth little but something that's not yet discerned.
Backtracking contemplation of what's to be learned,
Not quite radiant afterimage of truthful lies burned.

A leak sprung from the curve of your hand in a dream.
So runs the river, so the stream, so the puddle in between
a trickle that turns and grows taught and lean, on a
burdensome cargo of thoughts that aren't clean.

A marble facade becomes so unique
and you'll never get caught, no never no not
you are invincible, a synchronized scream
We can try all we want but you won't be deceived.

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